Nowadays, by the emergence of big and important cities, societies may be influenced solely by most important cities and the function of small cities seems trivial. Some people believe that most famous cities make influence on societies while the others think that the role of popular cities are misleading. Personally speaking, societies are mostly affected by their most important cities and in what follows the most discernible reasons are discussed.
First and foremost, government spend most of their asset including, oil, tax, and other funds on big cities. Indeed, they try to enhance people life style by investment on only big and most important cities. Whenever people all around the country see the difference between big and small cities, they start to migrate to big cities and only people with low level of ability and understanding stay at hometown. Hence, gradually, the culture of the whole community and finally society changes. For instance, United States of America, is only well-known for lonely two most important state, California and New York; and people all around the world judge their culture based on these two glorious states.
Besides, the behavior and culture of people who live in big cities are quite different to the people who live in small cities. Actually, people in small cities are usually engaged with agricultural activity and they don't devote any time for cultural activity such as going to the cinema, concert, and etc. So, the life style of these people is different to the whole societies and studying their life style is apart from the culture of society. For example, Bahrein is a small country which has one important city "Meneme" and some other trivial cities. The culture and lifestyle of people who live in Meneme is completely different due to their business and communication. Hence, this country should be judge only based on most important cities.
However, some modern cities may mislead the researchers and investigators considering this aspect. There are plenty of examples in which people of a one big city have different culture in comparison to the other cities of that country. Take Emirate as an example; a country with mostly 90 percent arid environment which bankrupted last decade. The government started a project 50 years ago, in which in only one part of the country plenty of skyscraper constructed. So, people tried to judge the country only by its most important city "Dubai" and after a while, nomadic people from suburban attacked to Dubai and took all of the investors’ assets.
All in all, as the above-mentioned examples have illustrated, mostly, the culture people who are living in the big cities are the same as their country, nonetheless in some case it may not be reasonable and its background should be investigated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2375.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16304347826 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78930834093 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460869565217 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 752.4 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6480402705 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133683218259 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523860037393 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367768273228 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829451462947 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028210666194 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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