When question comes about understanding foreign society, one may say, that it is important to meet people from there, perhaps learn nation’s history or language, live for a while in that society. One of the points of view on this topic is that important characteristics of a society can be explored through studying in its major cities. While I admit that this recommendation has good point, I find that it is not correct for 100% and can not be used as ultimate guide.
Nowadays, we live in fast, technology developed society and due to urbanization, a lot of rural population moved to urban areas. In those high-loaded cities people usually live a busy life, loosing connections to former roots and forgetting traditions. Major cities are economically and technology advanced, with big population, they also may have many foreigners living in it, thus creating more like mixture of people and traditions than preserving original characteristics of society. I believe that modern cities are in most cases similar to each other, so there is no use of learning any culture just by visiting only its major cities.
From my personal experience, I know that big economically developed cities are completely different from villages and small cities, whose population have another life in any respect. There is even an expression in Russian, that says not to judge all Russia by Moscow and Saint-Petersburg, which are biggest and most developed cities in the country. Citizens’s of those two town differs from other Russians sometimes very dramatically.
As another example, nobody will fully understand German culture by visiting Berlin or Munchen, because they are not representative for a whole nation. But if somebody will visit German rural areas with it’s small villages, little traditional festivals and markets, this will indeed give a picture of a Germany as a society and reveal bunch of facts about of German people and the life they spare.
In a contrast, to the authors respect, I can agree that major cities of a nation are useful to visit, because they are important political and economic centers, which play big role in country’s life. Additionally, major cities are usually old one, so they hold big historical and architecture value, which can provide pieces of information needed to understand any society.
In conclusion, I believe that understanding important characteristics of a society cannot be done through studying only major cities. Any researcher should acknowledge that they are not as representative and sometimes rural areas can tell more about society and its traditions. However, I think that major cities are important and can serve as additional sources of information, therefore sometimes they are helpful to visit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2332.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26410835214 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06296337235 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530474040632 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 761.4 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2566162973 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.176470588 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0588235294 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167778418903 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597363430036 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518149211982 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913729961292 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446764011407 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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