Whether we want or not, we are exposing to history of our nation, family or even about a company. Some people convince that understanding the past is not helpful to those in current positions of leadership, however, the following essay will largely disagree with above statement with reasons and examples.
Admittedly, it seems unnecessary to comprehend about the past for the leader because the past is only the past, not telling about the present and the future. Furthermore, the society where we live in is very rapidly changing as much as even the futurist cannot predict correctly about our forthcoming future. Thus, it looks plausible that we do not need to understand events which is occurred in the before the present.
However, understanding about our past is not just a burden to us. It could make us reflect our ancestor's mistake and help us not to repeat the same mistakes which is already done by our forefather. If people in current positions of leadership do not care about what happened in the past, those leaders would be easy to fall a trap like his or her precedent.
Moreover, the above argument is targeting to people in leadership position. Generally, consequence and influence of leaders' decision is more important than the decision of members of certain groups. Thus, the leader need to be more comprehensive and thoughtful than others because of their impacts to the their family, company or even the nation we belong. If the leader do not make the decision by analyzing and contemplating the events of past and just ignore the history, it would entail a harmful damage to all of their members.
Consequently, for the leaders and even for lay peoples, understanding history is essential to make a better choice in one's life, company and society. There may be the situation where historical lessons do not work, however, most lessons will illustrate how to react in current circumstances correctly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...than others because of their impacts to the their family, company or even the nation we b...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'harmful damage'.
Suggestion: harmful damage
...ust ignore the history, it would entail a harmful damage to all of their members. Consequentl...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...is essential to make a better choice in ones life, company and society. There may be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99068322981 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80332275963 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518633540373 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.552752012 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.785714286 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155289263029 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544591414072 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665737337105 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921006581478 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581871176091 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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