Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
It is often said that every picture has a story behind it. However, in the current age of media and advertisement, the true story behind the story is often blurred out by other information, leaving out the real meaning behind it. Hence, although in contemporary society this has become a reality, however, I believe that it is up to us to verify the truth and disregard the falsehood behind such fake depictions.
Today the outlook of a person, company, organization or even nation is everything because apparently making a good impression is all that counts. Everyone wants to look nice and tempting and it doesn’t matter what purpose of such image is designated for: work, an outing, a business meeting or walking a pet out. The reality of that look is unfortunately forgone. All people care about is first impression as once it has been lost, it cannot go back, change its mind and become friends with you. A good example is a simple party: the invited and uninvited people come bearing in mind how they look in the first place rather than what kind of truth lies behind the image. We all wish to have this chance of apprehending a person’s predilection towards another human being and only then people will become best friends, colleagues, indifferent to each other or even enemies. Otherwise, presenting truth first will lead to lost chances of happiness, joy and success. If a girl has been ditched by her male in the day of her best friend reception party, a chance of finding another boyfriend, forgetting and making this parting a history is greater if the girl created a carefree, charming image instead of whining and seeking somebody to bolster up her courage. Ultimately, first impression makes us care more about our image rather than the truth behind it.
A nice-looking image can lead a person to a safe and stable career. Here the same trend will go with an important business meeting of two companies where partners have to discuss a procurement activity of a third party that they head. It is feasible that not all the partners would be actively participating, some of them could be unprepared for a meeting if they have been notified in a short notice. These two companies don’t necessarily have to get rid of such employees and such situation would not happen as the alluring image has been created for this purpose so that to hide the truth of the fact of not being ready. Meanwhile, the meeting is in the process, the images have been created, they are working, no one can say, hey I see that you are not ready for the meeting - you are sacked. If a person has an ability to ingratiate, quickly manage his/her faults during the process, he/she is fine. That is why, all of us tend to greatly care about how we look rather than what is behind the image.
There are sometimes cases when people show the truth and reality of their images instead of exalting their appealing look. All such people try to convey is to be just to themselves. Meanwhile it works and the image is of less importance to them, in most cases, such people change their minds and in the end their images prevail to them. If a person loses his/her job, friends, such a person lastly chooses an appealing image instead of the reality that is behind the look. The reason why he/she lauds a good-looking image is that the person is overwhelmed with incremental losses happening due to exalting the truth of the image first. Thus, such a person tends to an easier way of managing a situation, that is, creating a charming look no matter what reality is behind it.
People today care more about a nice image and its truth comes second. Though it is sad, nevertheless; it helps us make friends faster and have a consistent career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, hence, however, if, lastly, look, nevertheless, second, so, then, third, thus, while, kind of, in most cases, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 33.0505617978 203% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3090.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 657.0 442.535393258 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70319634703 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06280665599 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58604031526 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 305.0 215.323595506 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464231354642 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 972.0 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0640677994 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.444444444 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273311746123 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730059893136 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551545317018 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14490783975 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461862807685 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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