Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
society has become such a competitive place where people race against each other in every aspect of life.it is all about chasing dreams or goals and emege successful.The above statement states that creating a appealing and successful image in a society has much priority than the truth or reality behind it.I agree with the above statement as only small proportion of people taste success but many are eager for it.
For instance,consider the actors of bollywood which is one of biggest movie industry based in India.Most of the actors find roles in bollywood movies with help of nepotism.In other words,many of the new generation actors are either children or relatives of already established actors.This made opportunities diminished for upcoming new talent outside the film industry even though they are much more talented.The nepotism is result of eagerness for success as it is quick way of making successful image in society with privilege and fame.However,another reason which supported is encouragement from audience.They too played their part in accepting all the actors irrespective of their acting talent.people completely ignored the reality or efforts behind gaining that appealing image.
Similarly,the obsession for successful image can be explained clearly with example of student passing a subject with good grade.people do not question whether the student is honest in giving the examination or if he was subjected to malpractice.In the end,it only matters whether the student claeared the exam with good or not.The same thing can be reflected in any of institutions today in contemperory society.Most of the times atleast in country like India,candidates who are relatives of those people who are in power would easily be offered with a higher position in any of the governmental department without assessing if the candidate possess all the required qualities for a position.
Morevoer,when people manage to gain a appealing image in a society,they further tend to oppress normal people to cover up their image.Many politicians resort to such practices to hold the power for more time.
Therefore,it is responsibility of the people to make society a better place and accept individuals who would deserve the appealing image and who do not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39436619718 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21321166754 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 23.0359550562 308% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 252.472889634 60.3974514979 418% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 383.0 118.986275619 322% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.0 23.4991977007 302% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.4 5.21951772744 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151671657604 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902441044902 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476231396054 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902441044902 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476231396054 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.5 14.1392134831 279% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.51 48.8420337079 -36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 12.1743820225 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.17 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.65 8.38706741573 139% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 11.2143820225 271% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.7820224719 229% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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