Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
University is a place of learning, place where one explores oneself, find where he/she is good at. Usually before taking admission into a univerity, one's
asked to select a specialisation they wish to join and are admitted accordingly. Later on, in the subsequent times they're asked to choose courses in a specific pool related to the specialisation choosen. This issue addresses by allowing students in a university to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study and the issue isnt as simple as two sides of a coin and requires deeper comrehension to conclude.
Universities are presumptuous that candidate has well planned their career and will stick to it. But, meanwhile, they forget that the whole life is an ongoing learning curve and requires exposure, the exposure which is provided at the universities. This exposure is necessary for the adults who are the future of the world. For instance if a person has choosen Signal Processing and Machine Learning as his specialisation and with this knowledge if he wants to work on a atomic structure based problem statement, he will be helpless with his Machine Learning skills. So to solve a practical statemement, a little knowledge in different domains always comes handy. And after all these are the people leading the country, and they require all skills.
On the other hand, there's always "Jack of all trades and master of none". This cannot be denied, as in a competitive world as such of ours, there's always a need to be unique and stand out. And there's a provision always to beg help from the others who're specialised in the domain one's not into. But to give back to the country, one has to be an asset in a domain atleast with the foundation clearly set up, to avoid being a liability.
With this discussion, it can be concluded that one's personal interest matters the most. If one is sure of the domain they want to pursue in and he/she shouldn't be forced to choose topics they aren't interested in. Whereas, candidates who like exploring and approaching a solution by considering various domains should be allowed to take topics out of their course.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so, well, whereas, while, after all, as to, for instance, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8904109589 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79530475164 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564383561644 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2047246206 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159993390352 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447626406327 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107410965672 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09388506925 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124015669286 0.0667264976115 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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