"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records"
it is undeniable that the development of cameras and other machines regarding creating and editing such documentations have been rushed recently. thus, one would argue that since video camera has improved much nowadays, recording contemporary life as video is more important form of documentation than just writing it. From my perspective, however, written records are still more important form than videos.
Admittedly, it is undeniable that saving and recording contemporary life as video is more easy and effective. The chief reason is that video can record any visual sources and acoustic sources, but written records cannot. For example, many videos of ces 2019-which was recently held in America-are present in youtube. since videos can carry all the visual and acoustic factors of contemporary life, viewers of the videos in their own home can experience similar with people who experienced ces 2019 directly. Even videos can carry experiences with VR, which cannot be explained as written record alone, viewers of these videos can experience them satisfyingly. thus, carrying and recording contemporary life as video seems more advantageous than in written form.
Yet, this does not necessarily mean that recording contemporary life as a video form is more important form of documentation than in written form. it can be related to the storing and transferring problem of such data. videos allocate lots of memory but can carry only a limited amount of data, but lettered form can carry much more data in same amount of data capacity as that of video form. thus, it is much more harder to transfer or store the certain amount of data in video form than it in written form. Hence, the form of video might be advantageous in certain aspects, it cannot be more important form of documentation than written records.
Also, economical and budget problems can occur to this issue. Almost every documentations-from governments to corporations-are in written form because videos cannot be printed. In another words, there must be a video viewer in order to watch the video. however, written records can be accessed or spreaded easily just by printing it. Therefore, in regarding to budget problems, it is more economically efficient to take a written record than a video. thus, videos cannot become a more important form of documentation.
To sum up, it is actually a complex issue, thus no easy answers regarding this cannot be presented. Despite many advantages using video as a type of recording contemporary life, written records are still a more important form of documentation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28846153846 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96657601029 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456730769231 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9256578584 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.0 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420504841176 0.243740707755 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169237599906 0.0831039109588 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119277225171 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291186443803 0.150359130593 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530078696704 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.