Children’s leisure activities must entirely be educational. Do you agree or disagree ?
Children are basically fun loving, agile and creative. To sustain in this highly competitive world some people believe that the free time of children should be academically related. However, I believe that the open hours of children to be allowed to spend in other activities of their interest.
To begin with, as success in life is not synonymous with academic achievements alone, parents must try to develop other traits in their children such as curiosity, analytic skills, rational thinking etc. Instead of focusing the leisure time to be an extension of study time, it should be made more crea...
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Score: 9.0 out of 9
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 384 350
No. of Characters: 1958 1500
No. of Different Words: 214 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.427 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.099 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.859 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 136 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.211 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.144 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.284 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.466 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.145 0.07
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