Children’s leisure activities must entirely be educational. Do you agree or disagree ?
Children are basically fun loving, agile and creative. To sustain in this highly competitive world some people believe that the free time of children should be academically related. However, I believe that the open hours of children to be allowed to spend in other activities of their interest.
To begin with, as success in life is not synonymous with academic achievements alone, parents must try to develop other traits in their children such as curiosity, analytic skills, rational thinking etc. Instead of focusing the leisure time to be an extension of study time, it should be made more crea...
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