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The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of million years.
Given is the diagram illustrating the stages of development of the horse during 40 million years. It is clearly seen that, there are noticeable changes in the form of horse, especially the foot structure.
We can immediately see that, approximately 40 million years ago there was an animal called eohippus. In comparison with a modern horse, it was significantly small and with less hair on it. Furthermore, his foot structure was marginally simple, to be more precise it consisted of 4 large and a little smaller fingers. After 10 million years, it became higher and had a little amount of hair on...
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