IELTS WRITING TASK 1

The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph explains the changes witnessed in the number of viewing of two new music sites on the internet over a 15 days period.

A glance at the graph shows that, during the first day, 120000 people visited Pop Parade music site, while only a third of this (40,000) watched Music Choice. Visit to Pop Parade site remained constant for three days and there after kept falling and reached all-time low of below 40,000 viewers. While, viewing of Music Choice dipped on second day, it rose on third day to 60000 online viewers, and thereby fell again. From 7th to 9th day both the site showed similar trend with a variation of around 2000 viewers.

Moreover, the number of people watching Pop parade site continuously increased and reached 150000 viewers on day11, whilst, seven times less (20000) people viewed Music choice on the same day. The viewing of Pop parade dipped on 12th and 13th day to around 80000, whereas, for that of Music choice rose six fold (120000)to that of day 11. However, on the 15th day visitors to Pop parade reached 170000 and that of Music choice fell below 80000.

To sum up Pop Parade was the preferred music site by the people.