although it is brilliant thinks that the way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities is by reducing the need for people who have daily trip, it is clear there are several ways that can be adopted to reduce the the amount of traffic by the government like increasing public transportation or providing some facilities that people can work in their homes.
it is obvious that the amount of traffic is being reduced by reducing the daily traveling because many people are transferred by their cars most of the time which is lead to traffic jam and they wait in this traffic for hours in the rush hou...
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Sentence: although it is brilliant thinks that the way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities is by reducing the need for people who have daily trip, it is clear there are several ways that can be adopted to reduce the the amount of traffic by the government like increasing public transportation or providing some facilities that people can work in their homes.
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Sentence: it is obvious that the amount of traffic is being reduced by reducing the daily traveling because many people are transferred by their cars most of the time which is lead to traffic jam and they wait in this traffic for hours in the rush hour and waste their time and the best solution that can be adopted to tackle this problem is that the government create several laws that force the people do their duties in their homes and send them for their supervisor and they should go to their companies
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No. of Sentences: 5 15 (Don't write a sentence too long)
No. of Different Words: 119 200 (Need to improve your language)
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Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 301 350
No. of Characters: 1383 1500
No. of Different Words: 119 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.165 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.595 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.442 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 57 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 60.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.653 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.646 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.892 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.417 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5