Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
Some people think that wealthy nations must share their wealthy among poorer nations by giving different helps such as food, healthy care and education. Other think that governments of poorer nations must take care of their people. The issue is controversial one, but in my opinion a closer examination reveals that countries , which have good recourses, have to distribute their riches among poor countries for several reasons. I will explain my position providing examples to support my point of view.
One reason is to be prepared educated specialist in poor countries. For example , everybody knows that poorer nations are more inclined to study. If rich counties provide them with strong education, they will be able to gain knowledgeable people and draw these specialist to their countries. By this way, rich countries can increase their economy, life style, technology and so on. Obviously, the mentioned reason indicates that helping to poor counties is also useful to wealthy countries.
Another reason that supports my opinion is plentiful natural resources of the wealthy countries. They can provide their own food, oil, crops and so on to the poorer counties. By dint of charitable, rich countries are been able to recognize in all over the world by their own products. Apparently, they have a great chance to improve their agriculture ,by this way.
In summary, referring to the above mentioned reasons the wealthy nations should to assist the poorer nations by proving food,education and so on.
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The issue is controversial one
The issue is a controversial one
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