Some people feel that the responsibility for providing education should be borne only by the government and that private education should be banned What are the main advantages of banning private education Are there any circumstance where private educatio

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Some people feel that the responsibility for providing education should be borne only by the government and that private education should be banned.
• What are the main advantages of banning private education ?
• Are there any circumstance where private education should be allowed ?
• What is your own opinion on the matter ?

Some people think that the state should have duty to serve educational service, not be provided by private school. In my opinion, I partially disagree with this opinion because I think both public and private sectors should cooperate to make a good education.

​ Without private school, many benefits may be brought to educational sector. First of all, the government can apply a standard curriculum which is properly used to the students in different levels around the country. If the country wants to develop its progression in any particular way, it will be able to use educational...

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to access educational services that be offered equally by the state.
to access educational services that are offered equally by the state.

it is not worthiness
it is not worthy

in order to operating the good education
in order to operate the good education

This concept will lead to fairness society which the gap of social status is narrower than in the past.
This concept will lead to fair society where the gap of social status is narrower than that in the past.

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