Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, change is still debateable in social life because some people think that change is not needed and they prefer to do same things, however, the others argue that change is important in their lifes. This essay would argue that change is always a good things to take more opportunities in facing the dynamic world life.
Some people tend to do same things without change perhaps they are already comfort with their zone now. They would not take a risk action because they believe it could make their life changes even become worse than before. For instance, a man who works as accountant in o...
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change is also essential thing to take more opportunities that is provided by global changing.
change is also essential thing to take more opportunities that are provided by global changing.
Sentence: Nowadays, change is still debateable in social life because some people think that change is not needed and they prefer to do same things, however, the others argue that change is important in their lifes.
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Sentence: People could easily maintain relationship with their friends by using some social medias.
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Sentence: They could easily get new customers by using advertising in some blogs or social medias.
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