Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, thanks to development technologies, the method of lives will be changed immediately. Although, this trend is very slow in developing countries, many people should be adapted by these changes sooner or later. It can not be ignored that any change has its own advantages and disadvantages.

On the one hand, many people prefer to spend their time doing same things and refusing change. They afraid these changes have bad impact on their lives and their disadvantages outweigh advantages. For example, many people strongly believe that some changes due to development technologies make several problems for their families and threat their relationship like internet and television.

On the other hand, others think that change is always a good thing and brings valuable outcome for people who struggle with it. They believe that without change, many inventions could not be built and human kinds could not be prospered. For example, if people did not invent engine motor, other inventions that were related to engine motors could not be invented.

In conclusion, I think that change is not always good and its own disadvantages too. More over, these days, people use different kinds of tools and equipments and can not rely on old methodologies. I believe that any changes need to be managed before introducing to people and prepared people for accepting it. It is clear that people afraid of accepting new ways due to different changes because they do not have any information about their outcomes. Therefore, one of the basic prerequisite that should be paid utmost attation is advertising the advantages of changes.

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Sentence: These days, thanks to development technologies, the method of lives will be changed immediately.
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Sentence: They afraid these changes have bad impact on their lives and their disadvantages outweigh advantages.
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Suggestion: Refer to They and afraid

Sentence: Therefore, one of the basic prerequisite that should be paid utmost attation is advertising the advantages of changes.
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