Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

In Indonesia, nowadays, many people to do anything's, then many choose to do something. Because, our country have accessibility for know many information's in internet. With have accessibility to can get many knowledge, make some people to do anything. Such as, in Jakarta have many place and activities to do, because many people rival to get work, study, and other employment. Then their prefer to cacth what do want it. If, their can make it happen for what to need or want it, people well ready to get it. Moreover, make people change's about their life to can move to better place or anything. But some people can't move for better their life's, their stay in convertation zone, and make many peopledont do variaty activities. Many people think, their will prefer to spending time doing the same things, and many people think make a change's for a good think.

In Jakarta have very much activity can do it, but many people think to stay with the same activity. Because, people no need improve and adaptation in new environment. Moreover, people do activity more better with the same activity, example when people work or have comfrotable a job for their, if their stay and spend time for a long time, will make improve and easy to work. Next, for people think to do a change's to spend their time to find a new activity make people can exploration and grow in very much situation. Then, make many friends and have many skill. For instance, people move or have many friends exactly their many activity to spending time.

In any case, stay in zone comfrotable can make people have many problem solving, if their find many problem in their life. Because people stuck in the relathionship with friends and anything. For example, people have two friends and just stay in their environment, their can't grow better because their can't get many time and communicate with many people orr friends. Than, if people have plan to spending time, their can't make relathionship. For intance, if many friends their can't to close with all their friends.

Then my opinion about many people want to stay and a change in their ive's, back to personality. Because each human is different.

In conclusion, people can make a change to spend time and many people stay in comfrotable zone, that's choose many people. My solution, about that, we should be improved our skill and problem solving to do anything. We can find with my rule and my way.

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Sentence: Because, our country have accessibility for know many information's in internet.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and know
Description: The tag a noun, singular, common, genitive is not usually followed by in
Suggestion: Refer to information's and in

Sentence: With have accessibility to can get many knowledge, make some people to do anything.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to With and have
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to to and can

Sentence: Then their prefer to cacth what do want it.
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to their and prefer

Sentence: If, their can make it happen for what to need or want it, people well ready to get it.
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to their and can

Sentence: Many people think, their will prefer to spending time doing the same things, and many people think make a change's for a good think.
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to their and will
Description: The tag a noun, singular, common, genitive is not usually followed by for
Suggestion: Refer to change's and for
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to good and think

Sentence: Moreover, people do activity more better with the same activity, example when people work or have comfrotable a job for their, if their stay and spend time for a long time, will make improve and easy to work.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by an article
Suggestion: Refer to comfrotable and a
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a comma
Suggestion: Refer to their and ,

Sentence: Next, for people think to do a change's to spend their time to find a new activity make people can exploration and grow in very much situation.
Description: The tag a noun, singular, common, genitive is not usually followed by to
Suggestion: Refer to change's and to
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to can and exploration

Sentence: In any case, stay in zone comfrotable can make people have many problem solving, if their find many problem in their life.
Description: The fragment , stay in is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace stay with verb, past participle
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to their and find

Sentence: In conclusion, people can make a change to spend time and many people stay in comfrotable zone, that's choose many people.
Description: The fragment that's choose many is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace choose with verb, past tense

Sentence: Then their prefer to cacth what do want it.
Error: cacth Suggestion: catch

Sentence: But some people can't move for better their life's, their stay in convertation zone, and make many peopledont do variaty activities.
Error: variaty Suggestion: variety
Error: peopledont Suggestion: peopleb don't
Error: convertation Suggestion: conversation

Sentence: Moreover, people do activity more better with the same activity, example when people work or have comfrotable a job for their, if their stay and spend time for a long time, will make improve and easy to work.
Error: comfrotable Suggestion: comfortable

Sentence: In any case, stay in zone comfrotable can make people have many problem solving, if their find many problem in their life.
Error: comfrotable Suggestion: comfortable

Sentence: Because people stuck in the relathionship with friends and anything.
Error: relathionship Suggestion: relationship

Sentence: In conclusion, people can make a change to spend time and many people stay in comfrotable zone, that's choose many people.
Error: comfrotable Suggestion: comfortable

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No. of Words: 421 350
No. of Characters: 1947 1500
No. of Different Words: 144 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.53 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.625 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.358 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.84 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.428 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.64 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.398 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.55 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.178 0.07
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