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Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
If women should be allowed to join military forces just like men is a debated topic of the last decades. Since the second half of 19th century, our society has changed in several issues, like the one related to women rights. The decision if to allow females to join the army like men is anyway a more complex argument, because of the particular skills required to military forces members. My opinion is that women should be allowed to join army, navy and air forces exactly like men, mainly because nowadays roles of these forces have changed consistently if compared to last centuries, but also...
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If women should be allowed to join military forces just like men...
Whether women should be allowed to join military forces just like men...
Sentence: Moreover, the advantages of having women in the army, navy and air forces are too much to not remove, both in the military and in public opinion, any sexist prejudice.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a negator
Suggestion: Refer to to and not
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Need to polish sentences.
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 341 350
No. of Characters: 1600 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.297 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.692 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.518 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 114 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.231 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.407 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.923 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.373 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.6 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.113 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5