Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community instead of visiting people and talking with our family we just watch television To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community instead of visiting people and talking with our family we just watch television.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is indisputably taken for granted that technology, as we all are aware and have probably experienced, not only makes a fundamental contribution to have a more convenient and improved personal life, but also plays a vitally significant and effective role in every individual’s social survival. One of the topics of heated debates among psychologists is what effects has the invention of television in human existence lives. Some people are of the point of view that television is a menace and it can be dangerous on account of the fact that people spend a wealth of time on watching television in...

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Sentence: They believe that it cause one to not to talk with his family members and just watch television.
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