You were hurt in a minor accident at the supermarket and you wish to complain to the manager. In your letter- say who you are- give details about the incident- suggest how supermarkets could prevent such accidents.

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You were hurt in a minor accident at the supermarket and you wish to complain to the manager. In your letter
- say who you are
- give details about the incident
- suggest how supermarkets could prevent such accidents.

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am a resident of XYZ block which is situated near your supermarket ( in ABC block). i am a regular customer of your supermarket and generally do the majority of my grocery shopping there.

Though I am satisfied with the service provided by your supermarket, I would like to bring to your notice a recent accident that took place while I was shopping there which caused me some minor injuries.

On 4th August, I visited the supermarket around noon. on entering, my attention was drawn towards an elaborate display of soup cans which were artistically arranged in the shape of...

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