The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China.
The bar graph elucidates the number of possession of personal vehicles from 1987 to 1999 in China.
In general, the number of motors owned by citizens increased gradually and marked a noticeable change of vehicle ownerships during the observed times. The figure extremely noticed a significant change of vehicle ownership between 1987 and 1999.
The quantity of vehicle ownership in China in 1987 pertained at below 500 vehicles per thousand individuals. This number steadily increased between the year of 1987 and before 1995, which was around 1000 vehicles per thousand people. During the period 1991 to before 1995, the vehicle possessions in China have remained unchanged at below 1000 vehicles per thousand citizens. In 1995, the possession of vehicle ownership skyrocketed, about 2000 vehicles and was doubled than previous number. This figure grew up significantly through following years and in 1999, it accounted a steep increase, approximately 4,100 vehicles per thousand head. The figure for the Chinese vehicle ownerships in 1999 have increased more than 8 times of those figure in 1987.
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The figure for the Chinese vehicle ownerships in 1999 have increased
The figure for the Chinese vehicle ownership in 1999 has increased
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