The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

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The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

The bar graph elucidates the money spent on different consumer goods by the people from four different countries from Europe, namely; Britain, France, Italy and Germany.

Overall, all the countries from Europe consumed more than 140 thousand pounds sterling for the goods. UK people have consumed the most money on all six different goods whereas German people spent the least to buy them.

As it can be observed from the bar graph, British people purchased the most on photographic film of more than 170 thousand pounds sterling compared to other nations. This trend is similar to the rest of the goods; Toys and CDs have purchased by more than 160 thousand pounds sterling while perfumes, tennis racquets and personal stereos spent more than 150 thousand pounds sterling.

Italy had spent the same amount of money on photographic film and toys of more than 150 thousand pounds sterling while for the rest of goods consumed more than 150 thousand pounds sterling. France showed the similar spending habits of those in UK as they spent on photographic films of more than 160 thousand pounds sterling while Toys and CDs were the next highest consumable goods of more than 150 thousand pounds sterling. For perfumes, tennis racquets and personal stereos consumed over 140 thousand pounds sterling in France. Meanwhile the most popular purchasing goods in Germany were tennis racquets of 150 thousand pounds sterling, whereas for the rest of products consumed around 140 thousand pounds sterling.

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