The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented bar chart illustrates the diversity in maximum number of Asian elephants from 1994 to 2007. From the overall graph it can be easily seen that India kept its majority on elephant population during given period of time.

To go into more details, as given in the chart, India held its superiority in number of elephants hiting its higest point at almost 10000 in 1997 and at 7500 in 2004. It is clear that Myanmar is in the second place with about 5400 and 4800 between 1997 and 2004.

Interestingly enough, all Asian countries demonstrated their falling tendency from 1997 to 2004,...

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