The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
A glance at this graph provided reveals the how many books read, divided by genders, at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014.
Overall, the trend was an increase for both genders until 2013. However, there was a steady decline at women trend in 2014. Also, Females read more books than Males from the beginning of the year. Moreover, the breaking point of both genders was in 2013.
As it can be seen that Women read about 5000 books in Burnaby Public Library while Men read about 3000 books in 2011. In term of Women trend, the number of books read was increasing from 2011 to 2013 which approximately 5000 books, 8000 books, and 9500 books respectively. Furthermore, there was a fall in 2014 which were same as the number of books read in 2012. With regards of Men trend, there was a slightly increase about 1000 books read in 2011 to 2012. There was a sharp rose between 2012 and 2013 with about 6000 books read and it reached about 14000 books in 2014.
Although Females read more books than Males from the beginning of the year, Women trend still dropped at the end of the year while Men trend increased.
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A glance at this graph provided reveals the how many books read
A glance at this graph provided reveals how many books read
there was a slightly increase
there was a slight increase
Sentence: However, there was a steady decline at women trend in 2014.
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Suggestion: Refer to women and trend
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