The map below compares the changes that took place in 1978 and 2001.

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The map below compares the changes that took place in 1978 and 2001.

The map compares the layout of a college with its construction plan in 2015.

At present, to the north of the rectangular campus, there is a garden opposite to the entrance. Along the west lies a footpath and two car parks and in the south there is a bus stop. Inside, two classrooms and a toilet can be found in the south and a bigger classroom in the northeast corner near the reception center. Not mentioned is the seemingly open area for lunch in the north western and three more classrooms in its south.

The college is expected to demonstrate many differences including its extended length, along with which the car park will also expand its sizes. The garden and the footpath will vanish while a shop will be introduced inside. Noticeable, the entrance and the toilet will exchange its places, with the former directly leading to an oval reception. Along the east wall four classrooms will be located.

Overall, despite the differences, that all the facilities are built immediately adjacent to each other and against the wall will remain consistent.

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