Percentage of people rating certain factors as important when buying a new house.

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Percentage of people rating certain factors as important when buying a new house.

The line graph shows four age groups who purchased their new houses based on certain priorities, measured in percentage. It appears that a neighbourhood with low crime rate is considered an utmost important factor for all age groups, while the accessibility to parks and public transport are thought to be the lowest priorities.

As can be seen, the proportion of low crime rate is above 75% throughout the age groups and it is slightly higher for the 55-64 one at 80%. This is followed by the presence of schools with just more than 50% for the 25-34 and 35-44 groups. However, unlike crime rate,...

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