The water use in 2000 by six countries in the Middle East.
The table shows six different countries in the Middle East used water in 2000. At first glance, it is evident that while Bahrain and Kuwait use of water predominantly for domestic purposes, the other fours countries used it mainly for agriculture.
Turning first to Kuwait and Bahrain, Kuwait had the highest use of water, at 63%, whereas its use for agriculture was only a third of this. Accounting for a slightly lower of use for domestic purposes was Bahrain, but it used two times more water that Kuwait for agriculture.
In contrast to this, the remaining four countries used much more water for agriculture. The highest were Saudi Arabia (85%) and Oman (83%). Interestingly though, these countries had particularly low levels of domestic water use. Next, Qatar and UAE used 62% and 65% respectively for agriculture and about half this amount for domestic purposes.
Finally, all countries used very low amounts for industrial purposes, all at under 8%, the only exception being Kuwait at just under 20%
- Metro Systems 80
- In many countries, schools have severe problems with students behaviour.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 56
- The chart below gives information about the ageing population worldwide in 2000 and makes predictions for 2050. 80
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings?Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.You should write at least 250 words. 70
- Universities should provide students with the skills they will require in order to succeed at their future jobs How far do you agree or disagree with the above opinion What are some of the job skills that employers look for in new employees 84
the other fours countries
the other four countries
whereas its use for agriculture was only a third of this.
Description: 'this' refers to what?
but it used two times more water that Kuwait for agriculture.
but it used two times more water than Kuwait for agriculture.
and about half this amount for domestic purposes.
and about half this amount is for domestic purposes.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 167 200
No. of Characters: 808 1000
No. of Different Words: 91 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.595 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.838 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.652 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 51 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 39 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.166 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.455 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.686 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.131 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4