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Write a letter to your colleague and ask him/her to help you prepare a presentation
Dear Vic,
Hope this letter finds you good. I am writing because I am really in need of your assistance to prepare presentation over Information technology (IT) issues.
As you know, I am studying IT in Griffith University. Now, I am in my last year and I need to deliver a presentation over what I have studies and add most current statistics over Australian’s big IT companies’ challenges. I tried but could not find it anywhere on internet and recent articles. So I have decided to create my own survey and request to Australia’s most prominent companies about what exactly is the main ...
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Sentence: Hope this letter finds you good.
Description: The fragment you good . is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace good with adverb
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 217 200
No. of Characters: 961 1000
No. of Different Words: 134 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.838 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.429 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.679 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 59 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.692 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.085 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.361 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.621 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.18 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4