Write a letter to your new employer stating that your inability to join duty on the prescribed date and asking for extra time to join. Give valid reasons for the delay.
Dear Sir/Madam,
Kindly recall the letter of offer which you have favoured to me for the post of Hardware Engineer for your desk a week ago. In this connection, I write to you to inform my inability on the day I was slated to join.
Firstly, I am extremely sorry to inform you that my current employer has requested me two more weeks to relieve me from my present job due to delay of legal formalities to be completed as per company rules. Secondly, although, I am much interested to work for your firm, the commitments which I had signed earlier with my present company is preventing me to join ...
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