1 You recently visited a tourist attraction and you were very pleased by the help given to you by the staff Write a letter to the head of the staff at the tourist attraction in your letter Give details of the circumstances of your visit Describe the help

Dear sir/madam

I am writing this letter to express our sincere gratitude towards the help provided by your staff during our stay at your hotel.

I was there at Jungle Safari Resort with my family members for our one month holiday. We enjoyed a lot with pristine view of idyllic Chitwan jungle and wild flora and fauna. Moreover, the fun with elephants in the river and Polo game was a memorable holiday in our life.

In addition, we are so much overwhelmed by the help provided by your staff when I lost my passport during our stay there. Most of the staff came to me and advised possible solutions to the problem and they tried their best to overcome from such a hectic trouble. At the end, we didn't feel any burden in our mind.

I, on behalf of my family members would like to advise you to maintain your place always with such kind and hearty staff forever. we were fully contended from the warm greetings and smiley faces of your staff more than actual services your hotel did.

We all wish you and your hotel the best in coming days.

Sincerely
John Smith

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