The given bar and pie charts illustrate the deals of jeans of mango co. and jack & jones co. are guessed for thousand of pairs as well as predicted the shares in the market at the end of the next year in percentage wise.
Overall, initially jack & jones co. is high in month of january and it dramatically decreased in the month of february before it rose significantly but in the months of july and August it was steadied and reached to highest peak while in projected market share, it was highest. With some ups and downs Mango co. was increased until August before it receded and it is low compared to others.
In the month of january, jack & jones co. is at 450 pairs of jeans whereas Mango co. is least with 100 pairs. From february onwards the two companies considerably grew until june having around 400 and 300 pairs of jeans respectively. However, there is a drastic increase in mango co. and sold 450 pair of jeans while he sales fell to 320 pairs of jack & jones co. in july and i is steadied till august. Although it rose to 500 pairs in august, it stabilized until november before plateaued. The projected market share is less approximately 20% for mango co. when compared to jack & jones co. is 30%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ngo co. and jack & jones co. are guessed for thousand of pairs as well as predict...
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.... and jack & jones co. are guessed for thousand of pairs as well as predicted the share...
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...ll as predicted the shares in the market at the end of the next year in percentag...
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...lly jack & jones co. is high in month of january and it dramatically decreased in...
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Suggestion: to the highest
... and August it was steadied and reached to highest peak while in projected market share, i...
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...stic increase in mango co. and sold 450 pair of jeans while he sales fell to 320 pai...
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...ately 20% for mango co. when compared to jack & jones co. is 30%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52272727273 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47777678127 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513636363636 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.5809068629 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5294117647 112.824112599 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9411764706 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174491918381 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496585011389 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073810164175 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146870224271 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109511560434 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.2329268293 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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