Average Carbon Dioxide (CO2) emission per person, 1967-2007

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Average Carbon Dioxide (CO2) emission per person, 1967-2007

The graph above shows us the average carbon dioxide emissions per person from 4 different countries in Europe. The countries are United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal, which measured from 1967-2007. For those 4 countries, there is slightly different pattern.

In Portugal, the carbon dioxide produced by each people showed the increasing graph by the years. It started from 1 point in 1967 and keep going up in every decade, until reach the 5 point in 2007. Its almost the same for Italy, the only difference is in Italy, it only increase until 1997, and stay in the same point in 2007.

This pattern cannot be seen in United Kingdom and Sweden. In United Kingdom, the emission keep decreased for every decade, started with the highest poin in 1967 and had the lowest in 2007. While in Sweden, it also started at a high point in the early year, increased in 1977, and gradually going down for the next two decades.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ecade, until reach the 5 point in 2007. Its almost the same for Italy, the only dif...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...he only difference is in Italy, it only increase until 1997, and stay in the same point ...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77639751553 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30539394647 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3820703706 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249772130136 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980690912688 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11081970205 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173975600697 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1009591 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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