The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.

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The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.

The bar chart given illustrates the predicted number of jeans sold by the two well-known jeans companies, namely Mango and Jack & Jones in Turkey in 12 months next year.
Overall, the total expected sales for Jack & Jones Co. Are higher than those for Mango Co. Moreover, the highest expected sales are in December while the lowest is in February.
In the first half of the year, January is predicted to have the highest sales for Jack&Jones co. with almost 500,000 pairs in comparison with those for Mango co, with nearly 200,000 pairs. It is expected that there will be a significant decline in the sales of both companies next month, about 250,000 and around 100,000 pairs, respectively. Subsequently, the earning from these companies is projected to increase gradually to 400,000 pairs of Jack & Jones and 30000 pairs for Mango.
In the second half of the year, the forecast is that the sales of Mango will rise and overcome the figure for Jack & Johns in both July and August with the difference above 100,000 pairs. However, it will be steady from August to November till rise moderately in December, about 600,000 pairs. Meanwhile, the sales of J&J are predicted to go up slightly from September till the end of the year and reach a peak at 900,000 pairs in December.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82648401826 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46996883453 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529680365297 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4796787453 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.444444444 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233936246527 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102740619687 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08061966194 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159430768717 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832359471217 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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