The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian people participating in physical activity routinely according to age and gender in 2010.
Overall, within most age groups, there was a slight difference between the percentage of male and female citizens doing physical exercises regularly. Meanwhile, the proportion based on gender was relatively balanced in the age group of 65 and over.
It is noticeable that in four groups of ages including 25 to 34, 45 to 54 and 55 to 64, the proportion of women practicing physically outweighed that of men by about 7 to 10 percent. Markedly, the most substantial disparity can be seen the 35-to-44 group with a 13-percent gap as the percentage of men and female sports players were 39.5 percent and 52.5 percent respectively.
In contrast to the four mentioned groups, men between 15 and 24 tended to be more active in tasks requiring strength than women of the same age as the figure for men in this category was 52.8 percent compared to that of women with 47.7 percent. Another remarkable feature is in the group of those above 65 which witnessed a balance between male and female sports partakers as the number was around 47 percent for each gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93137254902 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80943513856 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4312168487 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.714285714 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159436699888 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717321874015 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586116616847 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992928697813 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048006894465 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.