The given bar chart illustrates proportion of daily physical exercise in Australia by male and female in various age group in 2010.
Overall,Majority of women doing more exercise then men except teenagers girl whereas male teenagers doing highest proportion of physical exercise among the all age group of male.
According to this chart age group 15 to 24 was the highest proportion of male who doing daily physical exercise figure was 52.8 percent after this age group the present of male was decreased at the 35 to 44 age group and it sink to 39.5 percent it was the lowest percentage for all age groups and also both gender from this lowest point again percentage was increased gradually in the final age 65 and over it reached 46.7 percent.
At the beginning age of this chart 15 to 24 percentage of women daily exercise was lowest number among the all age group of women amount was 477 % but after this age proportion of male daily physical activist increased gradually and the age group of 45 to 54 it reach at peak and figure was 53.3 percent it was highest participation rate entire chart next age group lost the growth but this figure was quite similar then previous age group and final age group this percentage turn into 47,1%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69266055046 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46085256237 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435779816514 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 22.4926829268 240% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.343168501 43.030603864 361% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.75 112.824112599 227% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.5 22.9334400587 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263290838962 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189843328025 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435318668622 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189843328025 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435318668622 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 13.2329268293 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.13 61.2550243902 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.3012195122 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.81 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.9970731707 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.0658536585 217% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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