The given chart compares the proportion of each gender in Autralia at 6 groups of ages exercising regular physical activity in the year 2010.
Overall, in the year 2010, the percentage of women who did physical activity is higher than men did in all ages, except for ones ranged from 15 to 24 years old.
In 2010, boys at the ages of 15 to 24 exercise physically accounted for 52.8%, but when they got older, they tended to exercise less, this figure for men who are 35 to 44 years old was just 39.5%. By contrast, the number of women doing physical exercise gradually increased from 47,7% when at 15 to 24 years old to 52.5% in the age of 35 to 44.
However, when men turned to over 45 years old, they began to exercise more, in particular, the proportion of male people doing physical activity considerably rose with the highest percentage in this period was 46.7% at the age of 60 and over. Meanwhile, there was a opposite trend in the number of women excerise in these groups of ages. After reaching a peak at 53.3% when at 45 to 54 years old, women started to exercise physically less, this figure for women at these ages fell by 47.1% when they are 65 years old and over.
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- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity 61
- IELTS 10 Test 3 Writing task 1 The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison
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- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...d to exercise less, this figure for men who are 35 to 44 years old was just 39.5%. By c...
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Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ge of 60 and over. Meanwhile, there was a opposite trend in the number of women e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, while, except for, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40182648402 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33376668093 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497716894977 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6886012313 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.714285714 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250066776636 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145967101452 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787625106166 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199565708856 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693483849958 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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