The bar chart below shows the production of the world s oil in OPEC and non OPEC countries Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

The graph illustrates global oil production by the ratio of oil barrels per day in OPEC and Non-OPEC countries. Three periods are considered: 1980-2000, 2000-2010, 2010-2020 (forecast). The overall production increased of about one-half from the first to the second period, then slightly decreased from 2010 on.

At a first glance, the share of oil produced by OPEC Middle East countries experienced a steep growht, going from about 2 million barrels in the first period to over 15 million in the 2010-2020 span and thus accounting for over 80% of the total (estimated around 17 million barrels). This trend negatively correlates with that of Non-OPEC countries’ production, which constituted the biggest share in the first period and was dramatically reduced by nearly 4/5 in the last interval of time considered.

Finally, Non-Middle East OPEC countries, whose production was irrelevant in the 80s, gained momentum between 2000 and 2010, with a share comparable to that of Non-OPEC countries at the same time. Albeit seeing their production sharply reduced in the following years, it is predicted that they will maintain the same ratio with Non-OPEC countries.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, then, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34239130435 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82319563636 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3838559179 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.428571429 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19976393067 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103447847566 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077578072947 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144097316972 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285082826847 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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