The given bar chart gives information about the ten highest producers and consumers of electricity around the world in the year 2014. The unit of measurement is in billion kWh.
Overall, it can be seen that the rate of manufacturing electricity in these countries is higher than the consumption rate except for Germany which shows the opposite trend. China is the highest producer and consumer of the product followed by the United State which has the highest quantity of reserve with the Korea Republic having the lowest rate in the year 2014.
It is clear from the graph that, China being the highest producer and utiliser of electricity has around 76 billion kWh of electricity in reserve followed by the USA with 233 billion kWh in reserve while Russia has about 49 billion kWh in the given time period. Similarly, other countries like Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil and the Korea Republic all have their production level higher than their consumption rate with about 30-160 billion kWh of the product in reserve.
On the other hand, Germany is the only top manufacturer of electricity with its consumption higher than its production with about 55.9 billion kWh in deficit in the given year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...ear 2014. The unit of measurement is in billion kWh. Overall, it can be seen that th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, while, except for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99504950495 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55063898647 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490099009901 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.5418203369 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.166666667 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13880101247 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853234085222 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486318989999 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101905344089 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342019005663 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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