The bar chart depict the amount of electricity generation and usage among ten leading countries in 2014. Overall, it can be seen that all countries produced more amount of electricity than their usage, except for Germany.
China was on the first place, with amount of electricity produced at 5398 billion kWh while only used 5322 billion kWh. The next was United States, which generated 4099 billion kWh electricity and utilized 3866 billion kWh. However, there was a great divergence between the first two countries and the rest eight countries, at approximately more than 3000 billion kWh.
Russia, Japan, India, and Canada were on the third, fourth, fifth, and sixth place, respectively. The generation amount were ranging from around 600 billion kWh to approximately 1000 billion kWh, while used electricity between about 490 billion kWh and 1000 billion kWh. On the seventh and eighth placed were Brazil and Germany, which had similar amount of production and consumption, at around 500 billion kWh for generation, and approximately 450 billion kWh for utilization. At the last place was Korea Rep. which generated 485.1 billion kWh electricity and used 449.5 billion kWh.
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- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, third, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29787234043 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66352897493 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.78374468 43.030603864 385% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.0 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0928688384252 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746618669809 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607873187789 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926663707924 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609100573633 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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