The bar chart gives information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010
The bar chart shows how many library books from each category were borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001.
Two genres of books, crime novels and children’s fiction, showed a reduction in the number of books borrowed. Furthermore,
the borrowing of crime novels decreased from approximately 500 in 1991 to slighdy over 200 in 2001, whereas the number of children’s fiction books taken out nearly halved from close to 700 to just under 400 during the same time period.
However, all other categories of books experienced an increase in the number borrowed, with the biggest jump in the self- improvement category, which increased from just over 200 in 1991 to slightly under 1,000 in 2001. But, Romance books also had a surge in popularity to 1,400 in 2001.
All in all, the number of books lent in most categories increased with the exception of the categories of crime novels and children’s fiction.
In conclusion, the pie chart gives information about the gender of Lammertown library members in 2010: approximately two thirds were female and about one third were male.
- The bar chart below shows the number of employees from the European Union in the United States (1999) 78
- We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer based technology 67
- Central and local government make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue. Some people think this money should be invested in social programs for the poor. 73
- Due to the increasing density of living areas in a city, most residents are suffering from physical and social dangers. Consequently, they are against living in the city. 67
- The bar chart gives information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e number of books borrowed. Furthermore, the borrowing of crime novels decreased ...
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Line 11, column 67, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...books lent in most categories increased with the exception of the categories of crime novels and chil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so, third, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19889502762 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86120643148 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552486187845 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7033482806 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.428571429 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365047444786 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160922785462 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151378490275 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180578194763 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155810484012 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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