The following graph describes about the amount of electricity generated and used by ten countries in 2014. Overall, it can be seen that China had the most production and consumption amount where Korea Rep. had the least number of production and usage of electricity. All nations, except Germany, consumed more than produced.
On the first rank was China which generated 5,398 billion kWh and utilized 5,322 billion kWh. China was then followed by United States with the production amount of 4,099 billion kWh and consumption amount of 3,866 billion kWh. However there was a huge gap after China and United States, where the rest of the countries' production and consumption amount did not even reach a half of United States and China's.
Russia led the remaining nations with 1,057 billion kWh in generation and 1,038 billion kWh in utilization. Russia then followed by Japan on the 4th place, which produced 936.2 billion kWh and consumed 856.7 billion kWh. On the 5th and 6th place there were India (871 billion kWh in production and 698.8 billion kWh in consumption) and Canada (618.9 billion kWh in generation and 499.9 billion kWh in usage). The 7th to 10th ranked countries (France, Brazil, Germany and Korea, Rep.) produced in a range of approximately 485 billion kWh to 561 billion kWh) and consumed between about 449 billion kWh to 462 billion kWh). All of the countries had more production than consumption, with an exception for Germany which used electricity more than produced it, at the amount of 526.6 billion kWh and 582.5 billion kWh, respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 260.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01538461538 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58387122987 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476923076923 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.865994135 43.030603864 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.888888889 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8888888889 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0761273156316 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490550349091 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447548331599 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777783925942 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042359536628 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.