The bar chart illustrates someland’s main exports three different product in the years 2005, 2015 and projected for 2025.
Overall, dairy products is the highest export products in someland’s now a days but in future it will goes down , international truism take over and got the highest amount of money. It is clear that over the time meat products exports will be decreased than 2005 level.
According to the bar chat, international tourism was the highest point at 2005 it got almost 6.2 billion USD. Over the time it increases in 2015 it was approximately 6.8 billion and in future it will be raised at almost 8 billion USD. But dairy products was climbed most in 2005 to 2015 almost 3 billion, in 2005 it was 5 billion and 2015 it was almost 8 billion,but in 2025 it will be reduced a little (approximately 0.5 billion).
In the case of meat products it declined over the time period, in 2005 it was 4 billion and it decreased chronologically in 2015 it was 3.5 billion, in future 2015 it will be 3 billion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'product' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'products'.
Suggestion: products
...and's main exports three different product in the years 2005, 2015 and projected f...
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Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...hest export products in someland's now a days but in future it will goes down , inter...
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Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... export products in someland's now a days but in future it will goes down , inter...
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Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...apos;s now a days but in future it will goes down , international truism take over a...
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Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...w a days but in future it will goes down , international truism take over and got ...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llion, in 2005 it was 5 billion and 2015 it was almost 8 billion,but in 2025 it w...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...illion and 2015 it was almost 8 billion,but in 2025 it will be reduced a little app...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n, in future 2015 it will be 3 billion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63186813187 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88298885058 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0744205657 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.428571429 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156846628391 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101486615821 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103846350832 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145367519631 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119770638294 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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