The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).
The bar chart illustrate the proportions of three major living problems, faced by citizens of seven cities of the UK, in 2008.
Overall, it can be seen that Belfast was facing the most problems regarding to health services and education & training while least air pollution was found in Newcastle. Furthermore, health services and education & training were facing highest issues compared to air pollution which was minimal in all the cities.
In terms of health services problems, Belfast had the highest proportion of complains at just under 60 percent followed by Cardiff and Birmingham, where the percentage was around 55 percent for both cities. It is also noticeable that all the cities were showing above 50 percent problems in health service except for Glasgow for which percentage was just under 50 percent. On the other hand, Problems with education & training in all the cities were around 50 percent except for Manchester and Newcastle, for both of them it was around 45 percent.
With regards to air pollution, Manchester was leading at about 18 percent while all the other cities had the index close to 10 percent. Newcastle was showing least concern about air pollution, at about 5 percent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'while the least'.
Suggestion: while the least
...ealth services and education & training while least air pollution was found in Newcastle. F...
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Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'facing the highest'.
Suggestion: facing the highest
... services and education & training were facing highest issues compared to air pollution which ...
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Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'showing the least'.
Suggestion: showing the least
...ndex close to 10 percent. Newcastle was showing least concern about air pollution, at about 5...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, so, while, except for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11675126904 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61532024808 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502538071066 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4340156996 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0772375987013 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474496810884 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700811730405 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077790071138 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879911325166 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.