The pie charts illustrate information about how world's water is distributed while graph gives percentage of water used in agriculture, domestic use and industry in three countries (Egypt Saudi Arabia and Canada).
Overall, salt water has highest percentage in category of majority of world's water. Whereas, fresh water is made up of mainly ice and glaciers. In Egypt and Saudi Arabia water is used in agriculture with great percentage.
To begin with, in first pie chart, it is readily apparent that, from majority of world's water only small portion is accounted for freshwater, precisely 3%. However, 97% water comes in the category of salt water. Further, from second pie chart, it can be seen clearly, surface water only stands for 1% in field of freshwater, while freshwater has 20% portion of ground water. In addition, freshwater is produced by ice and glaciers with 79%, that is greater than two given sources.
As per bar graph, 90% water is utilised in the field of industry in Canada, this figure is larger than other countries in this particular field. Similarly, for agricultural chores, Egypt and Saudi Arabia consumed 80% and 78% water respectively, higher in comparison with other nations. interestingly, all three countries used less than 20% water for domestic purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... charts illustrate information about how worlds water is distributed while graph ...
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Suggestion: has the highest
...abia and Canada. Overall, salt water has highest percentage in category of majority of w...
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...econd pie chart, it can be seen clearly, surface water only stands for 1% in fiel...
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Suggestion: Interestingly
...igher in comparison with other nations. interestingly, all three countries used less than 20%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, similarly, so, whereas, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1961722488 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70828613027 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569377990431 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9184914014 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7272727273 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401338227891 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171716296709 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102107811894 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277515414389 0.15604864568 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781233317316 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.