The provided data confers an acuity about the sleep patterns of masses in divergent five designations, according to the Contemplation of Canadian study.
It is crystal clear that the students have a proper time schedule for sleeping from 12 pm to 7 am as compare to other professions because they have to an accentuate on their study without any gap, whereas the truck drivers consecutively take rest 3 hours from 4 pm to 7 pm and 7 am to 10 am in a day and drives 12 hours without any rest in the evening from 7 pm to morning 7 am and 11 am morning to 4 pm afternoon. When it comes on full time mothers, they have an unstable sleeping pattern owing to take care their children. Business executives spent less hours than students but more than doctors for taking nap and according to them most of the time is persistently utilized on work purposes 6 am to 11 pm as compare to other occupations. Finally, the doctors have an ERRATIC sleeping patterns and the sleeping is less appraised by them just for 5 hours with an interlude of 1 hour.
Overall, it indicates that the full time mothers and students both the occupations have similar as well as more sleeping hours whereas doctors take nap very less among the various categories of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...he sleep patterns of masses in divergent five designations, according to the Cont...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...have a proper time schedule for sleeping from 12 pm to 7 am as compare to other p...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... other professions because they have to an accentuate on their study without any gap, whereas...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...s without any rest in the evening from 7 pm to morning 7 am and 11 am morning to ...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ing to 4 pm afternoon. When it comes on full time mothers, they have an unstable sleepin...
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Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...full time mothers, they have an unstable sleeping pattern owing to take care thei...
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Line 3, column 555, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...eir children. Business executives spent less hours than students but more than doctors for...
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Line 3, column 555, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...eir children. Business executives spent less hours than students but more than docto...
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Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...hour. Overall, it indicates that the full time mothers and students both the occupatio...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...dents both the occupations have similar as well as more sleeping hours whereas doctors ta...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e similar as well as more sleeping hours whereas doctors take nap very less among...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71475165406 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.157792175 43.030603864 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.833333333 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5 22.9334400587 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118031282095 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838072937802 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076963124624 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119915963157 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08188053491 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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