The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales( in various formats) of film from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided bar graph reveals the information about the rentals and sales of films from a store in the given period 2002 and 2011

it can be clearly seen that the numbers of rentals was approximately 180,000 in the initial years but after that it is started decreasing regularly till last year and in the last year, it was over 50,000 where is the sales of VHS recorded between 50,000 and 100,000 in first year and it also decrease the and end in 2005

Furthermore, the sales of DVD was least under 50,000 in first year but it started increasing regularly and increased till 2007 but after that a bit decreasement shown in the numbers of DVD sales till last year whereas, the sale of blu-ray started from 2007 and increased for next 4 year and recorded over 10,000 in final year

Overall it is interesting to note that the sales of DVD was highest than all other sales

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...0 and 100,000 in first year and it also decrease the and end in 2005 Furthermore, the...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...les till last year whereas, the sale of blu-ray started from 2007 and increased for nex...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52830188679 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35710651213 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503144654088 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 159.0 22.4926829268 707% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 720.0 112.824112599 638% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 159.0 22.9334400587 693% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 42.0 5.23603664747 802% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134519502861 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134519502861 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110709484824 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858841667962 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 79.4 13.2329268293 600% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -56.07 61.2550243902 -92% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 60.6 10.3012195122 588% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.18 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.91 8.06136585366 173% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.4329268293 481% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 65.6 10.9970731707 597% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 11.0658536585 551% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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