The bar chart depicts the estimated rates of illiterate women and men worldwide.
The most obvious fact is that females have a higher rate of illiteracy than males in almost all estimated countries. However, in developed countries 3 percent of women are illiterate, while in South Africa more than a half of female population are illiterate. It is also noticeable that the a huge difference is between women and men in three large regions; sub-Saharan Africa, Arab states and South Africa, where men are more educated than women in almost 1,5 times. However, in Latin America and Carribean countries is less significant difference between men and women in comparison with East Asia/ Oceania, where the gap is 12%.
To conclude, estimated World illiteracy rate showes us how women are less involved in education and people need to struggle with this problem.
- The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000 84
- The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- friend has decided to switch careers but isn’t sure which to choose. What advice would you give them? Provide reasons and examples to support your response. 70
- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this change? Good or bad? 84
- The diagram below shows how salt is removed from sea water to make it drinkable. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...illiterate. It is also noticeable that the a huge difference is between women and me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12765957447 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69921288782 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609929078014 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1265752257 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137437191073 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851945926255 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879524017765 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140432776665 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709147794924 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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