A glance at the provided bar chart illustrates the information about the proportion of citizens in the USA who ate at fast food restaurants by six different frequencies from 2003 to 2013. In general, it is clearly apparent that in the periods given most of inhabitants in the USA went to fast food eateries once a week or once or twice a month.
Looking in more detail from the chart, people who consume fast food at restaurants once a week in 2003 were reported at around 30% and ended by 3% in the next decade although it rose slightly at 33% in 2006. Similarly, those who went to the restaurants once or twice a month were documented at 30% and increased at 33% in 2013. However, its figures dropped considerably at 25% in 2006. Following the two types of frequencies above, the third highest types of restaurants visit frequency were several times a week which ranged from near 16% to 20%. Furthermore, the visitors who spent their few times a year for eating at the fast food eateries were reported from 13% to 15% in the periods. Finally, those who never going to the restaurants or oppositely visiting everyday showed similar percentage at not more that 5% in the three cut off point of the periods.
- percentage of school children attendance among Specialist schools Grammar schools Voluntary controlled Schools Community Schools between the years 2000 and 2009
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- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people think that exercise and a good diet are not necessary for a healthy and long life To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise What are the causes and solution 73
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the inhabitants') or simply say ''most inhabitants''.
Suggestion: most of the inhabitants; most inhabitants
...arly apparent that in the periods given most of inhabitants in the USA went to fast food eateries o...
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Line 3, column 764, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... the restaurants or oppositely visiting everyday showed similar percentage at not more t...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, look, similarly, third, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60185185185 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66188807957 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.1066990154 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214669067634 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961135670303 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822806717993 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205105802513 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672218909686 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the inhabitants') or simply say ''most inhabitants''.
Suggestion: most of the inhabitants; most inhabitants
...arly apparent that in the periods given most of inhabitants in the USA went to fast food eateries o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 764, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... the restaurants or oppositely visiting everyday showed similar percentage at not more t...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, look, similarly, third, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60185185185 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66188807957 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.1066990154 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214669067634 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961135670303 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822806717993 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205105802513 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672218909686 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.