The Chart Below shows the milk export figures from three European countries between 2008 and 2012 Task 1 essay a barchat

The bar chart showcases the three countries in Europe with their milk trading between 2008 and 2012.

Overall, within the bar chart, Russia dominated the biggest export range and to contrary, Italy had a stable result during the years. However, there is Poland indicated the lowest tonnage of export.

The main changes involve the Russian milk shipping because the figures started up at 24 million tonnages in 2008 and there is no comparable country to Russia. The export increased slightly by 38 in 2009 and the numbers peaked at 40 in 2010. The tonnes of sending abroad declined dramatically to 34 and 28 in 2011 and 2012.

The other notable alterations are stability in Italy during all years. Initially, the numbers accounted for 17 in 2008. In 2009, the range of sending abroad remained relatively stable same as in 2008. The numbers escalated at a reasonable rate to nearly 20 in 2010. Then, in 2011 and 2012, the quantities only went up to 20 and 21 tonnages. When it comes to Poland, the marketing extent commenced at 13 in 2008, but, it diminished to 7 in 2009. The worst results are shown in 2010 with 5.5. Afterward, there was a decrease in amounts in 2011 to 13 tonnage. Finally, the figures for selling overseas in Poland finished in 2012 with 14 million tons.

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Average: 7.5 (9 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ad remained relatively stable same as in 2008. The numbers escalated at a reasona...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7533632287 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49202310806 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2813849501 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7142857143 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210419878153 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657244936861 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788981352938 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156768042035 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991408281307 0.0819641961636 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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