The bar chart illustrates information about the amount of households who own and rent accommodation during 93-period in England and Wales. The amount is presented in percentage.
At first glance, it is clear that X axis shows the year information, while Y axis depicts information about the percentage of households. The bar with darker color shows information about households in rented accommodation, while the lighter color provides information about households in owned accommodation. In 1918, the households that own accommodation reached their highest amount in around 70 percent. Furthermore, the percentage of accommodation owners then decreased in 1939 to around 60, but maintained its level in 1953. The percentage then decreased gradually from 1961 to 1991, with the percentage around 50, 50, 40, and around 30, respectively. It then successfully retained its level in around 30 percent in 2001. 10 years later in 2011, the percentage increased to around 30 percent.
The percentage of rented households reached its lowest level in around 20, in 1918. It then increased in 1939 in around 30 percent, and maintained its level in 1953. After that, from 1961 to 1991, the number of households that rented accommodation increased to around 40, 50, 60 and almost reached 70 percent, respectively. Furthermore in 2001, the percentage was still the same with 10 years before. In 2011, the percentage then decreased into around 60 percent.
So, in conclusion, the trends of households in owned accommodation and rented accommodation are the opposite.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...lmost reached 70 percent, respectively. Furthermore in 2001, the percentage was still the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, so, still, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40573770492 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18807942866 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430327868852 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0959117244 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9333333333 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223666105493 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903292018835 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702014776693 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172755069384 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030936140368 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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