The bar chart demonstrates the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in two countries ( England and Wales) over the 93 year period from 1918 to 2011. In general, the percentage of owned households showed an increasing trend, whereas, rented household exhibited a decline trend.
More specifically, there was 78 percent of household in owned accomodation in 1918 and it was also the highest percentage over the whole period. And, in that year, only 23 percent of rented accommodation marked the lowest percentage of the 93 years of time. Furthermore, the increasing and decreasing trends of owned and rented accommodation did not occur dramatically, they were results of gradual change. The lowest percentage of owned accommodation was 31 percent which happened in 2001, and the highest percentage of rented one (69 percent) was also in that year.
Moreover, in the year of 1971, both of the category had the identical proportion which was 50 percent. Interestingly, Even though, the owned accomodation and rented accomodation had an increasing and decreasing trend, the last year 2011 was an exception. As that year resulted in the opposite trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30107526882 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11657350437 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0147432088 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.555555556 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228508384806 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10845582766 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090930421142 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182226113633 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118473245353 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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